高考書面表達(dá)的四維提升
——詞、句、段、篇

湖北 龐 群

書面表達(dá)旨在考查學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)寫作能力，評(píng)價(jià)其能否運(yùn)用相關(guān)常識(shí)和語(yǔ)言知識(shí)進(jìn)行有效的文字表達(dá)，完成特定的交際任務(wù)。高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)評(píng)分原則明確規(guī)定，“評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性”。因此，除了注重詞句表達(dá)是否豐富、準(zhǔn)確外，內(nèi)容完整、邏輯連貫、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰也是極為重要的方面。書面表達(dá)的提升應(yīng)是多維度的，只有詞、句、段、篇秀其外慧其中的文章才能贏得閱卷老師的青睞。

詞——準(zhǔn)確亮眼

在高考書面表達(dá)評(píng)分原則中，“應(yīng)用詞匯的豐富性與準(zhǔn)確性”是評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容之一，豐富多樣、地道準(zhǔn)確的詞匯或短語(yǔ)能夠?yàn)槲恼略錾簧佟?/p>

詞匯替換

1.I like reading while my sister likes watching TV series.

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2.Today many young students dream of becoming famous online.

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3.I think reading is very good for us.

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4.I really hope that you can consider my suggestions.

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5.Would you please help me to turn down the radio?

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6.He refused to listen to his father.

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7.A new library is being built in our school.

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8.Your efforts will be very important.

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9.It is more and more important to receive a good education nowadays.

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10.The lives of Chinese people have increased steadily in the past twenty years.

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素材積累

?普通表達(dá) 高級(jí)表達(dá) 普通表達(dá) 高級(jí)表達(dá)happy delighted good outstanding/extraordinary/remarkable sad depressed/frustrated thank sb for sth be grateful to sb for sth boring dull cause result in/give rise to worried anxious be famous for have a high reputation for use employ rich wealthy/well off big vast/enormous poor needy/badly off new brand new know/realize be aware of different various/a variety of attractive appealing/inviting/fascinating energetic dynamic more and more an increasing number of enough abundant/adequate clever bright/smart/intelligent brave courageous/fearless very extremely/exceedingly only merely clearly obviously/apparently/evidently difficult demanding certainly definitely/undoubtedly on time promptly totally completely/absolutely/entirely finish fulfill/accomplish support advocate/in favour of advantage strength/virtue disadvantage weakness/shortcoming/drawback ability competence important of great importance/significance as soon as immediately/instantly want to do intend to do/desire to do/be eager to do very tired exhausted/worn out be busy with be occupied with/be engaged in sometimes occasionally be made up of consist of/be composed of express convey be used to(doing)sth be accustomed to(doing)sth make up for compensate for try one's best to do sth make every endeavour to do sth choice alternative most the majority of result consequence suddenly abruptly/unexpectedly proper appropriate so therefore/thus/hence/as a consequence should ought to you'd better... you may as well.../you are supposed to...carefully attentively remember keep...in mind get acquire/obtain take the responsibility shoulder the responsibility(to do/for doing...)tell sb sth inform sb of/about sth believe be firmly convinced that...

點(diǎn)石成金

1.用豐富的亮點(diǎn)詞匯替換掉普通詞匯能提升文章的檔次，但這要以準(zhǔn)確、得體為前提。熟悉亮點(diǎn)詞匯使用的語(yǔ)境才能保證表達(dá)的自然、流暢。

2.在日常的學(xué)習(xí)中，我們要注重亮點(diǎn)詞匯的積累，將以上表格不斷豐富和延伸，并堅(jiān)持訓(xùn)練替換思維。只有通過(guò)不斷地運(yùn)用、總結(jié)，我們?cè)谂R場(chǎng)發(fā)揮時(shí)才能避免生搬硬套，做到運(yùn)用自如。

句——自然高級(jí)

高考書面表達(dá)評(píng)分原則中對(duì)第五檔作文有“應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)”這一要求，這些復(fù)雜多樣的結(jié)構(gòu)的正確運(yùn)用，可以增加文章語(yǔ)言的層次感，使文章豐富多彩，更好地展現(xiàn)作者的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。這些高級(jí)句式主要是指定語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、名詞性從句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句等。……