The Biggest Change I’ve Made

The time went by fairly fast. I have definitely changed a lot in the past three years. I used to be short， but now I am taller. The biggest change， though， is that I enjoy reading more than I used to.

During my first vacation in junior high school， my teacher asked us to read more classics， so I read a variety of books like The Little Prince and Harry Potter， which taught me to be brave in the face of difficulties and never give up. After that， no matter how busy I was， I would read for an hour every day.

All in all， falling in love with reading is my biggest change， which makes me a braver and better person. And I will certainly learn to accept new changes.

河南省鄭州金桂中學

指導老師 辛會勤

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作者講述了自己初中三年最大的變化，就是更愛閱讀了。語言使用恰當，比如第一段“though”作為插入語，體現出具體的轉折，是常用的英文表達習慣。第二段敘事中，“during”“after that”等過渡性詞語的使用，極大潤色了敘事過程。