Ｔｏ Ｂｅ Ａ Ｍｏｓｔ Ｎｅｅｄｅｄ Ｐｅｒｓｏｎ

I have a dream that one day I will be amost needed person--a teacher.Does itsound strange? I began to have this dreamwhen I was only a child.I love children.Idon't think it a waste of time to deal withthem all the year round. On the contrary， itwill make me happy.

First of all， teaching is a job full oflove.Love can make wonders.I mean，sometimes， love can make something impos-sible possible. With love， you will be enthu-siastic and enjoy this job， which is some-times a tiring job. With love， you will weara smile every day. With love， you'll be will-ing to stay with your students and devoteyourself to the job. With love， you'll dealwith your students with a big heart， and youwill like to listen to their voices and knowmore about them.

Secondly， teaching is a challenging andcreative job.A teacher must be a goodlearner，in other words，he or she mustlearn with students， learn from them， andlearn for them.Teachers should alwaysshare ideas and opinions with them. I'd liketo ask questions like these: What is your opinionabout it? What do you think of it?

To be a most needed person--a teacheris a great but difficult task and is far morethan what I am now， so I're been trying todo everything I can to add to my qualities.

I've been trying to build up my confi-dence.I keep saying to myself， \"I'm thebest! I can do everything well?\" At the sametime， I keep myself exposed to any opportun-ity in which I can pick up my confidence.This is a simple way， but it's fairly effect-ive.

Ambition is the motivation for the real-ization of one's aim， while resolution helpsone to fill the gap between dream and real-ity. I have my own ambition too， so I oftenurge myself， \"Get on top of the mountain tobe the peak， and nothing on earth can stopme. \"

Passion is what I have been trying tocultivate.It means full concentration for asimple job.I keep my passion ice-like in-stead of fire-like. Fire-like passion may leadto fever and blindness， but mine is ice-like，so I'll be able to keep my mind calm andkeen enough to avoid silly problems.

I have a dream that one day I will be amost needed person--a teacher. No matterwhat difficulty there is in my way， I'll try，I'll manage， I'll fight， to realize my dream.

教師點評：小作者以流利的語言通過這篇小文章表達了自己成為一名教師的夢想。文章第一段作者提出了自己的夢想，二三兩段給出了想成為教師的理由，接下去幾段表達了自己為達到理想而在努力提高的三方面素質。整篇文章條理清楚，層次分明，最后一段畫龍點睛，充滿激情。難能可貴的是，小作者能學以致用，多次模仿使用教材中學過的語法結構和常用句型，這是值得肯定的。