我為總統寫簡介

人物簡介類的書面表達也是中學英語書面表達中常見的寫作類型，人物簡介類書面表達，通常對一個人物的介紹可能是零碎的片段#65377;要寫好此類作文，主要是對人物簡介的提示性語言進行邏輯串聯，使得表達的含義通順，恰當使用連接詞來增強文章的表達，寫清楚人物的生平和事件#65377;

●作文呈現●

請根據以下提示寫一篇不少于120詞的有關美國著名總統林肯的簡介:

參考詞匯:廢除:abolish/eliminate

●思路點撥●

本文的寫作內容是大家較為熟悉的美國總統林肯的一個生平簡介，林肯總統是我們書本上涉及過的人物，是我們較為熟悉的內容，本文的寫作主要是要注意以下三點:

1. 對于表格中給出的5項內容在描寫時要注意前后的調整整合，不一定要根據表格中給出的順序進行描寫，可適當將前后內容進行調整串聯，使得文章的表達更為流暢，更具有故事性#65377;

2. 人物簡介類文章常涉及人物的姓名#65380;國籍#65380;年齡#65380;出生日期等比較零碎的信息，在對這些信息進行描寫時要注意不要使用一個個簡單句羅列堆砌，這樣顯然會降低文章表達的質量，對于這些零碎的信息要注意使用一些復合句進行串聯，使得表達更為完整，以提高文章的檔次#65377;

3. 文章中主題內容要圍繞主要事跡進行描寫，不可主觀臆想，隨意發揮，當然內容可以適當發揮，略舉一兩例，但要注意篇幅，不可洋洋灑灑，長篇大論，將某一例子全面展開，只要點到即可#65377;

●參考范文●

Abraham Lincoln， president of the United States， was born in a poor family in February， 1809. Born in a poor family， he didn’t have the chance to go to school. As a result， he had to work in the field with his father to make a living.

Though Lincoln didn’t go to school， he was very diligent. He caught every chance to learn knowledge by himself. He worked on many different jobs， and he always took a serious attitude towards any work he did. Lincoln was elected president of the United States in 1860. He fought against the slavery and eliminated/abolished it， which saved many slaves. However， unfortunately he was murdered in a cinema.

In all， Lincoln was a good president. He worked heart and soul for his people， which in turn won him the respect of his people. (139詞)

●亮點賞析●

1. 文章第一段將表格提示中的信息進行了適當的整合，把相關的信息進行了串聯，使用了如同位語等結構，將姓名#65380;身份#65380;出生年月等信息用一個句子進行表達，意思表達清晰，結構組織嚴密#65377;如Abraham Lincoln，president of the United States，was born in a poor family in February，1809.

2. 恰當使用連接詞，使得文章銜接比較流暢，如使用了as a result，however，in all等#65377;

編輯/梁宇清