人物簡介類的書面表達也是中學英語書面表達中常見的寫作類型,人物簡介類書面表達,通常對一個人物的介紹可能是零碎的片段#65377;要寫好此類作文,主要是對人物簡介的提示性語言進行邏輯串聯,使得表達的含義通順,恰當使用連接詞來增強文章的表達,寫清楚人物的生平和事件#65377;
●作文呈現●
請根據以下提示寫一篇不少于120詞的有關美國著名總統林肯的簡介:

參考詞匯:廢除:abolish/eliminate
●思路點撥●
本文的寫作內容是大家較為熟悉的美國總統林肯的一個生平簡介,林肯總統是我們書本上涉及過的人物,是我們較為熟悉的內容,本文的寫作主要是要注意以下三點:
1. 對于表格中給出的5項內容在描寫時要注意前后的調整整合,不一定要根據表格中給出的順序進行描寫,可適當將前后內容進行調整串聯,使得文章的表達更為流暢,更具有故事性#65377;
2. 人物簡介類文章常涉及人物的姓名#65380;國籍#65380;年齡#65380;出生日期等比較零碎的信息,在對這些信息進行描寫時要注意不要使用一個個簡單句羅列堆砌,這樣顯然會降低文章表達的質量,對于這些零碎的信息要注意使用一些復合句進行串聯,使得表達更為完整,以提高文章的檔次#65377;
3. 文章中主題內容要圍繞主要事跡進行描寫,不可主觀臆想,隨意發揮,當然內容可以適當發揮,略舉一兩例,但要注意篇幅,不可洋洋灑灑,長篇大論,將某一例子全面展開,只要點到即可#65377;
●參考范文●
Abraham Lincoln, president of the United States, was born in a poor family in February, 1809. Born in a poor family, he didn’t have the chance to go to school. As a result, he had to work in the field with his father to make a living.
Though Lincoln didn’t go to school, he was very diligent. He caught every chance to learn knowledge by himself. He worked on many different jobs, and he always took a serious attitude towards any work he did. Lincoln was elected president of the United States in 1860. He fought against the slavery and eliminated/abolished it, which saved many slaves. However, unfortunately he was murdered in a cinema.
In all, Lincoln was a good president. He worked heart and soul for his people, which in turn won him the respect of his people. (139詞)
●亮點賞析●
1. 文章第一段將表格提示中的信息進行了適當的整合,把相關的信息進行了串聯,使用了如同位語等結構,將姓名#65380;身份#65380;出生年月等信息用一個句子進行表達,意思表達清晰,結構組織嚴密#65377;如Abraham Lincoln,president of the United States,was born in a poor family in February,1809.
2. 恰當使用連接詞,使得文章銜接比較流暢,如使用了as a result,however,in all等#65377;
編輯/梁宇清