2012年廣東高考英語讀寫任務解讀

一、真題解題指導

(2012年廣東)以約120個詞就老師影響學生的話題談談你的想法，內容包括：

(1)上文使你想起哪位對你幫助最大的老師；

(2)舉例說明該老師對你學習或成長的影響；

(3)你怎樣看待老師對學生的影響。

2012年讀寫任務的命題仍保持3個具體的內容要點，但仔細分析可發現，今年的第一個要點與第三個要點，考生很容易用一句話就寫完，這樣就會造成篇幅過短，內容不夠豐富。對于這樣的題，考生可以通過以下方式對要點進行拓展。

⑴單獨用一句話以翻譯法圍繞該要點的內容寫該段的主題句。

⑵運用To be specific， More specifically， Exactly speaking， To be exact（具體地說）在主題句后用2-3句進一步闡述該要點。

實例1（2010廣東）

你對用金錢鼓勵孩子學習的看法；

（主題句）From my point of view， it is not a good idea to encourage children with money. To be specific， to give money to children as a way of encouraging them actually would spoil them surely. What’s worse， it is likely that children would have no idea of their purpose of the study.

2. 第二個要點的關鍵詞為“影響”，因為命題要求舉例說明這一影響，因此考生需要描述自身的經歷即通過講故事的方式加以說明。但為了防止考生用過多的文字描述自身經歷，造成正文篇幅不一，一般建議考生以3-4句話簡單描述即可。

[參考范文]（概括略）

The article reminds me of my English teacher who helped me the most. To be specific， it was she that enabled me to know myself and realize my own value. What’s more， it was she that offered me the chance to recognize that confidence is the vital key to success.

When it comes to the impact my English teacher had on me， a good case in point is what happened to me when I was in senior two. I lost in the oral English contest on a Friday， feeling disappointed. My English teacher helped me get rid of the depression. With her help， I gradually regained my confidence.

In my opinion， the influence that a teacher has on the students is of great significance. To be exact， it is certainly beneficial to the students’ growth and their study. Moreover， it absolutely contributes a lot to bettering the students’ self-development as well as realizing their dreams.

二、常用套語

1. 描述回憶。

⑴ It reminds me of one of my friends who helped me a lot when I was in trouble last year.這讓我想起了去年在我身處困難時給予我很多幫助的一位朋友。

⑵ Having reading the article， I can’t help recalling the men who helped me out that night. 在讀完這篇文章后，我禁不住想起那晚給予我幫助的人。

⑶ To be honest， it recalls something that happened to me when I was in the middle school.老實說，這讓我想起了我讀中學時的一件事。

⑷ It suddenly occurred to me that it was confidence that helped me overcome the difficulties last year.我突然想起去年是自信幫助我克服了困難。

2. 舉例說明。

⑴When it comes to the harm of dishonesty， a good case in point is what happened on my last holiday.當談到不誠實的壞處，我上次度假發生的事就是一個很好的例子。

⑵ I think perhaps nothing can illustrate the influence my teacher had on me better than the example of her teaching me how to be myself.我想可能沒有比老師教會我如何做自己的例子更能說明老師給予我的影響了。

⑶A good example of this changed attitude can be best provided by the case of a student who stressed openly that going to the key university is not the prime objective of today’s students. 說明年輕人態度變化的一個很好的例子是一名學生公開聲明上重點大學并不是今天的學生所追求的首要目標。

3. 表達看法。

⑴I deem that/ I hold the opinion that the influence that my mother has on me is of great significance/importance.我認為，媽媽給予我影響是十分重要的。

⑵In my opinion/From my point of view， it is a good idea to raise people’s awareness of obeying rules and regulations.就我看來，提高人們遵守規章制度的意識是個好主意。

注意：描述積極的影響時，考生可運用以下的常用套語：

⑴It is certainly beneficial to helping the students to get to know the significance of study.這確實有益于幫助學生了解學習的重要性。

⑵It absolutely contributes a lot to the protection of people’s right and their duties.這確實有益于保護人們的權利和義務。

⑶It definitely benefits me a lot when I am really eager to regain my confidence. 當我很迫切地想要重拾信心時，這確實讓我受益頗多。

⑷It is surely helpful in promoting the spirit of the Universidad.這確實有益于推廣大運精神。

三、原創練習

2. 以約120個詞就成長過程中朋友給予的幫助談談你的想法，內容包括：

（1）上文使你想起哪位對你幫助最大的朋友；

（2）舉例說明朋友的幫助給你帶來的影響；

（3）你怎樣看待朋友的幫助給你的影響。

[參考范文]

（概括略）

Having reading the article， I can’t help recalling one of my friends who helped me the most. To be specific， it was she that offered me the chance to know nothing is impossible to a willing heart.

I think perhaps nothing can illustrate the impact of my friend’s help better than the example of the one that happed when I was in senior one. I remembered that day after knowing the results in the exam， I became depressed because I didn’t do well in it. However， having talked to my best friend， I felt confident again， because she enabled me to know as long as I worked hard， I would succeed one day.

I deem that the influence that my friend’s help has on me is of great importance. More specifically， it definitely benefits me a lot when I badly need help and encouragement. Besides， it is helpful in strengthening the friendship between my friend and me.

(作者單位：深圳市新安中學)

責任編校 蔣小青