讀寫任務中的第二部分,即發表看法這一部分的設置是十分靈活的,即以肯定、問題或關鍵詞等方式呈現要點。出題者只提供一個框架和導向,具體的內容由考生來補全。因此這部分的段落結構是相當重要的。要在這部分文段中做到層次分明,條理清晰,就要寫好每段的主題句,并將主題句放于段落的開頭,使文章層次清晰,讓閱卷老師一目了然。考生可以根據翻譯法、問答法與過渡法去寫每段的主題句。
一、翻譯法
直接以一句話翻譯該要點,作為該文段的主題句。要點以肯定的形式呈現的,考生可以遵循翻譯法去寫該段的主題句。
[例1]舉例說明該老師對你學習或成長的影響;(2012廣東高考要點2)
分析:該要點是以肯定的形式呈現的,因此考生可以遵循翻譯法去寫該段的主題句。
主題句:這讓我想起了我的英語老師——Mandy, 在學習上她對我影響很大。
This reminds me of my English teacher, Mandy, who has influenced me a lot in my study.
參考范文:
This reminds me of my English teacher, Mandy, who has influenced me a lot in my study. Inspired by her,I followed her instructions step by step,and gained achievements consequently. It is she who has taught me the value of study as well as the importance of making progress.
[例2]以你的經歷談談你和朋友相處的體會。(2012深圳一模要點3)
參考范文:
It reminds me of my experience of getting along with a girl who acted like Mary last year. At that time, other roommates took the same attitude to her as Jane to Mary. However, I helped her to realize that her behavior was improper and unacceptable. Then she changed and now we are living together happily.
[例3] 談談你自己或他人的一次團購經歷。(2012惠州一模要點2)
參考范文:
It reminds me of my experience of group buying. Last week,I surfed a well-known group buying website for two film tickets. With only 30 yuan, I got the tickets as well as two bottles of green tea, which saved me so much. It was a very nice experience.
二、回答法
以一句話回答該要點,并將該句子作為該文段的主題句。要點以問題的形式呈現的,考生可以遵循回答法去寫該段的主題句。
[例4]你認為怎樣才能更好地鼓勵孩子學習。(2010廣東高考要點2)
分析:該要點是以問題的形式呈現的,因此考生可以遵循回答法來寫這一要點的主題句。
主題句:我認為可以以下的方式更好地鼓勵孩子學習。
From my point of view,we can encourage kids to study in the following ways.
參考范文:
From my point of view, we can encourage kids to study in the following ways. To begin with, schools are supposed to educate kids by teaching them to study for their family. Besides, some meaningful activities are expected to be held to enable the students to know the significance of study.
[例5]你對過節送禮如何理解?(2011深圳寶安區一模要點2)
參考范文:
From my own perspective, sending each other gifts in holidays is a good way to express love or care. To be exact,containing the giver’s genuine concern, the gift presented contributes greatly to enhancing the friendship between each other. In addition, presents for holidays can be meaningful as they are the symbol of festivals to some extent.
三、過渡法
即根據關鍵詞的提示,考生自己編寫一個圍繞這個要點內容的過渡句來作為本段的主題句。要點以關鍵詞的形式呈現的,考生可以遵循過渡法去寫該段的主題句。
[例6]以約120個詞講述你(或你的朋友)為了幫助那些需要幫助的人籌集資金的經歷,內容包括:
時間、地點和原因。(2012深圳名校高三調研要點一)
分析:要點以關鍵詞的形式呈現的,考生可以遵循過渡法去寫該段的主題句。
主題句:羅杰的故事讓我想起了自己的經歷。
Roger’s story reminds me of my own experience.
參考范文:
Roger’s story reminds me of my own experience. When I was a pupil,a student in our class fell ill. He was said to need a large sum of money to receive treatment. But unfortunately his family couldn’t afford the operation at all. As a consequence, all of us made a decision to collect some money for him.
[例7]請約120個詞談談你對課本中植入廣告的看法,包括如下要點:
你的看法。(2013湛江10月高三調研要點三)
參考范文:
As far as I am concerned, I disapprove of the action. To be specific, it, to some degree, does damage to the campus where students are being educated to form the right concept about the world. Moreover, it will more or less cause the students to buy the goods, which, in the long run, will drive them to develop an improper concept of the consuming.
[試題精選]
(2011年廣東)以約120個詞講述一次你(或你的朋友)想家的經歷,內容包括:
⑴ 時間、地點和起因;
⑵ 想家給學習和生活帶來的影響;
⑶ 你(或你朋友)是如何應對的。
[原創練習]
1. 以約120個詞講述一次你(或你的朋友)好好利用一分鐘的經歷,包括:
(1)時間、地點和起因;
(2)談談好好利用一分鐘給學習或生活帶來的影響;
(3)你(或你的朋友)是如何應對學習時間不足的問題。
2. 以約120個詞對向雷鋒學習的現象進行議論,內容包括:
(1)你對向雷鋒學習的現象的看法;
(2)你的父母(或其他長輩)是如何鼓勵你向雷鋒學習的;
(3)你認為怎樣才能更好地鼓勵身邊的人向雷鋒學習?
參考范文
[試題精選]
In fact, in real life, everyone would have an experience of feeling homesick. I remember when I was 10 years old, I was sent to my uncle’s in another city because my parents were busy. There, I studied for two years. Although my uncle and his family were kind to me, I still felt homesick.
There is no denying/doubt that feeling homesick will cause endless awful effects in the aspects of my study and life. To start with, owing to the different teaching methods of different teachers, I found it difficult for me to understand the lesson. What’s worse, I often lost confidence because I didn’t adapt to the study atmosphere there.
In view of the seriousness of this problem, my priorities now should be focused on eliminating it in the following ways. First and foremost, I did my utmost to accept that place. What’s more, I did more exercises and paid special attention to my health. In addition, I spared no effort to communicate with my teachers as much as possible and turn to teachers for help when coming across difficult problems.
[原創練習]
1. In fact, in real life, everyone would have an experience of making use of a minute. I remembered yesterday, I came to school as early as before and successfully memorized 20 new words in a minute in the classroom before the first period in the morning.
There is no denying/doubt that making good use of a minute will cause endless positive effects in the aspects of my study. To start with, I can spare enough time to review my lessons and prepare for my college entrance examination. What’s more, I have the time to relax myself for a little while from the stressful study.
In view of the seriousness of this problem, my priorities now should be focused on solving it in the following ways. First and foremost, I must do my utmost to make the most of every minute during the time for break. What’s more, it would be better if I do pay special attention to the teachers during the class so that I don’t have to set aside some time to review what I learned in the class.
2. As far as I am concerned, learning from Lei Feng could be a mutually caring and benefiting act, which is the basis of the civilized society. Besides, lending a helping hand for no reward is actually an early form of volunteering.
I remember my parents often encourage me to learn from Lei Feng in the following ways. To start with, they always tell me some encouraging stories of them. Besides, they praise me every time I offer to help others.
The ways we encourage people around us to learn from Lei Feng can be listed as follows. First and foremost, we are urged to arouse people’s awareness of offering to help others. Moreover, we’re supposed to take the lead first to encourage more people to join us.
(作者單位:深圳市新安中學)
責任編校 蔣小青