高考英語書面有達中咨詢信的寫法

雷康成

咨詢信也屬于應用文的一種，正文通常包括以下三個要點：（1）闡明寫信目的； （2）咨詢詳情；（3）表達謝意，期盼回復。分析多年高考英語作文真題發現，2005年與2014年高考全國卷真題中以咨詢信的完整體形式命題，其他省市的高考真題則把咨詢這一內容作為寫作其中的一個要點進行考查。

一、常用套語

1. 寫信目的

（1）I am writing to ask for information about how to be a volunteer for the Asian Winter Games. 我寫信來是為了咨詢如何成為亞洲冬季運動會志愿者。

（2）I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding /concerning /on how to learn Chinese well. 我寫信來是為了想知道您是否可以給我提供一些關于如何才能學好中文的信息。

（3）I am writing to you for further information about the English training. 我寫信來是為了進一步了解英語培訓。

（4）Im writing for more information about how to better learning habits. 我寫信來是為了進一步獲取有關改善學習習慣的信息。

（5）I am writing in response to your advertisement. 我寫這封信是為了回復、回應你們的廣告。

2. 咨詢詳情

（1）Could you please tell me something about how to be a volunteer for the Asian Winter Games？您能向我介紹一下如何成為亞洲冬季運動會志愿者嗎？

（2）I would greatly appreciate it if you could tell me something about the rebuilt Qianmen Street in Beijing. 如果您能告訴我有關改建后北京前門大街的情況，我將感激不盡。

（3）I wonder if /whether you could tell me something about English speech contest to be held in our school on June 1st. 我想要知道您是否可以告訴我一些有關我們學校將在6月1日舉行的英語演講比賽的情況。

（4）I would like to know if /whether you could tell me something about summer courses. 我想要知道您是否可以告訴我暑期課程的情況？

（5）I would be much obliged to you if you let me know something about the summer camp. 如果你能告訴我有關夏令營的情況， 我將不勝感激。

（6）Could you （be so kind as to）tell me something about studentsvisiting group. 您是否可以告訴我有關學生訪問團的情況。

（7）I would （also）like to inquire something about a spokesman for animals. 我（也）想咨詢動物代言人的情況事宜。

（8）I would be grateful if its so kind of you to give me some essential information. 如果您能告知一些必要的信息，我將不勝感激。

（9）Id like to know something more about the volunteer activity. 我想要了解志愿者活動。

3. 表達謝意，期盼回復

如果您能回復，我將感激不盡。

（1）I would be grateful to receive a prompt reply.

（2）Id appreciate it very much if you could give me a reply.

（3）I am looking forward to your early reply.

（4）I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience.

二、高考題

1.（2015北京）假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華，請給你的美國朋友Jim寫一封郵件，告訴他你打算參加龍舟訓練營，希望他一起參加。郵件的內容包括：詢問對方的意向。[第三個要點]

參考范文：I wonder if/whether you are interested in joining the Dragon Boat Training Camp. I will offer you more information about it if you prefer to join it.

2.（2015天津）假設你是晨光中學學生會主席李津，你校擬向美國友好交流學校的中文班捐贈一批圖書。請根據以下提示，寫一封郵件與中文班班長Chris聯系，并告知將于今年七月赴對方學校參加夏令營時帶去贈書。[第三個要點] 詢問對方的其他需求。

參考范文：I wonder if/whether you should need any other things. Please do not hesitate to tell us.

3.（2013 全國大綱卷、新課標 I ）假定你是李華。請你給筆友Peter寫封信，告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會，帶去他想要的那幅中國畫，同時詢問他是否可以接機。信中還需說明：李明：高個子，戴眼鏡航班號：CA985 到達：8月6日上午11：30

參考范文：I would be grateful if its so kind of you to meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the US？

4.（2014 全國卷 I）假定你是李華，計劃暑假間去英國學習英語，為期六周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意，請給該校寫封信，詢問有關情況（箭頭所指內容）

注意：1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

3. 參考詞匯：住宿-accommodation

參考范文：

Dear Sir/Madam，

I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. Ive seen your ad， and Id like to know something more about your six -week English course. First， could you tell me when the course will start and how many class hours there are every week Besides， I wish there would not to be too many students in a class. Moreover， I wonder how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Furthermore， I tend to know if there will be a host family or a university dormitory. Im looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

5.（ 2005全國卷 I） 假定你是李華，正在英國牛津參加短期語言培訓，計劃星期天去倫敦旅游。互聯網上一則廣告引起了你的注意，但一些具體信息不明確（箭頭所指內容）。請給該旅行社發一封電子郵件，詢問有關情況。

注意：1. 詞數100左右，信的格式已為你寫好。

2. 可根據內容要點適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

3. 參考詞匯：牛津——Oxford 費用——fee

參考范文：

Dear Sir/Madame，

Im writing for more information about the day tour to London. As a student at Oxford University， Id like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge， could you tell me whether it covers the entrance fees for visiting the places listed and whether the lunch is included？Besides， I wonder if I need to bring along my own food and how long the tour will last. Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day， I would like to inquire the time to return. Moreover， I tend to know if there is any time for shopping. I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

三、省市模擬題

1.（2016佛山一模）假定你是高三學生李華，打算申請就讀英國某所大學。請給該校寫一封信，了解申請入學事宜，書信的內容要點如下：

[第三個要點]詢問入讀該校的條件（考試、社會實踐等）；

參考范文：I would greatly appreciate it if you could tell me what exams I need to take to apply to your university. Besides， I wonder if you have any specific requirement for social practice.

2.（2016深圳一模）假定你是李華，你計劃去英國蘭卡斯特大學參加為期六個月的語言培訓。你想寄宿在學校附近的英國人家里。該大學網站上的一則廣告引起了你的注意，但一些具體信息不明確（箭頭指內容）。請給該校發一封電子郵件，詢問有關情況。

參考范文：

Dear Sir/Madam，

I am a student from China and plan to learn English in Lancaster University for 6 months. I am writing in response to your advertisement. Here are few things Id like to clarify.

Firstly， could you tell me how I can get to the University from my host home Secondly， Id like to know if I would have a separate room of my own. And I wonder if there are any children in the family. I would be beneficial to have someone of a similar age living with me. Also I tend to know if they have any special customs. Lastly， I wonder what is included within the fees in the ad， and whether it should be paid monthly or weekly.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

四、原創練習

假定你是李華，正在英國倫敦參加短期語言培訓，計劃課余時間去兼職。互聯網上一則廣告引起了你的注意，但一些具體信息不明確（箭頭所指內容）。請給該公司發一封電子郵件，詢問有關情況。

注意：1. 詞數100左右，信的格式已為你寫好。

2. 可根據內容要點適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

Dear Sir/Madame，

I am a student ...

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

參考范文

Dear Sir/Madame，

I am a student who is participating in the language training in London for a short time and plan to find a part-time job. Ive seen your ad， and Im writing for more information about detailed information for the job in your company. Firstly， could you tell me how I can get to your company？ As for the salary， I wonder whether I am given it monthly or weekly. Besides， I would like to inquire the types of jobs. Also I would greatly appreciate it if you could tell me when I should go to work. Moreover， Id like to know if I have some time to rest during work.

I would be grateful to receive a prompt reply.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

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