My Dream
2017-03-29 00:29:32王永燦
成功 2017年9期
王永燦
臨清市金郝莊鎮中心小學六年級 山東 聊城 252656
Everybody have a dream,because we’re dreamers.In our heart,there is a colorful dream.Sometimes the dream is perfect,sometimes it’s special,sometimes it’s sweet,sometimes it’s yummy.
In my dream,there are some children.I always play games with them and enjoy ourselves.There are so many candies,too.Blue candies,pink candies,orange candies,apple candies...Howdelicious!In my dream,there is a specialsky,In ourworld,the sky is blue,but the sky of my dream is pink,some angels are having fun there.In my dream,white bird can fly high,flowers can sing songs,frogs have a jump race,tomatoes are blue,potatoes are yellow,all the things are different.
In my dream,Chinese people,Korean people,Japanese people,Italian people,Spanish people,American people and Russian people are hand in hand.All the people smile for ever.It is a balanced world.
In my dream,everything is wonderful,but our world isn’t like it.So we must like my dream,to let our world get more beautiful!
輔導評語：中國夢是國家的夢、民族的夢，也是包括廣大青年在內的每個中國人的夢。“得其大者可以兼其小。”只有把人生理想融入國家和民族的事業中，才能最終成就一番事業。每個年輕人都要念夢、追夢、圓夢。小作者的夢五彩繽紛，整個自然界讓人看了心曠神怡，各國人民友好往來，手拉手和諧相處。如此小的年齡，作品揭示了這么深刻的主題，難能可貴，耐人尋味。
