高考英語全國卷中招領(lǐng)啟事寫作導(dǎo)練

符曼靜

一、文體概述

招領(lǐng)啟事是拾到物品的個人或集體，用書面形式請失主前來認(rèn)領(lǐng)時使用的一種應(yīng)用文。其內(nèi)容包括：

1. 在正文上方居中寫Found；

2. 拾到的時間、地點；

3. 拾到物品的特征；

4. 表明尋找主人的意圖；

5. 提供聯(lián)系方式或地址；

6. 該啟事的有效時間。

拾到者執(zhí)筆寫的啟事需用第一人稱，反之用第三人稱。另外，拾到的物品時間用一般過去時，物品的特征等內(nèi)容則一般用一般現(xiàn)在時。

二、必備短語

1. a shopping bag 購物袋

2. a make-up bag 化妝品提包

3. claim it directly 直接認(rèn)領(lǐng)

4. period of validity？ 有效期

5. the deadline for ……的截止日期

6. be available 有空

7. undertake the responsibility 承擔(dān)責(zé)任

8. the consultation service 咨詢處

9. email me at發(fā)郵件給我到……

10. call me at撥打……聯(lián)系我

三、套用句式

1. Exactly speaking/To be exact， the purse is made of canvas and inside of it there is a picture， a bunch of keys and some money. 具體地說，錢包是用帆布做的，里面有一張相片、一串鑰匙和一些錢。

2. I am eager to find out the owner as soon as possible， so if you are the very one I am looking for， please call me at 13711211567。我急切地想要盡快找到物主，因此如果你就是我要找的人，請撥打13711211567與我聯(lián)系。

3. Or you can also contact me by emailing me at Tom@126.com. 或者你可以通過發(fā)郵件到Tom@126.com來聯(lián)系我。

4. The owner is expected to call us at 0755-2727992 or come to the consultation service in our railway station to claim it directly. 期望物主能撥打0755-2727992與我們聯(lián)系，或者來火車站的咨詢處直接認(rèn)領(lǐng)。

5. I would like to remind you that I will keep it until July 20. 我想要提醒你，我將會保管它直到7月20日。

四、習(xí)作修改 下列習(xí)作中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

Found

At 8 a.m. January 5， 2017， I find a white Puma coat in our schools reading room when I was reading there. Exact speaking， the coat is made of cotton and inside of it there are a purse， and a membership cards of a bookshop. I am eager to find out the owner as soon as possible， though if you are the very one I am looking for， please call myself at 13077859965 at 1：00 p.m. or after 9：00 p.m. every day. Or you can also contacted me by the emailing me at LH@163.com. Last but not least， I would like to remind you what I will keep it until January 29.

Xinan Middle School

Li Hua

五、課堂練習(xí)

假如你是高二（4）班的李華，你在食堂吃飯時，撿到了一個書包。現(xiàn)請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一則失物招領(lǐng)啟事。要點如下：

1. 拾到的時間、地點；

2. 書包的特征與書包里的若干物品；

3.表明尋找主人的意圖；

4.你的聯(lián)系方式與該啟示的有效期。

注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 100左右； 2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

六、課外作業(yè)

北京火車站的一位工作人員，在安檢處撿到了一個女生手提包，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容替北京火車站寫一則失物招領(lǐng)啟事。

要點如下：

1. 拾到的時間、地點；

2. 手提包的品牌、顏色與面料；

3. 手提包里的若干物品；

4. 聯(lián)系方式與該啟示的有效期。

注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 100左右； 2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考答案與范文

習(xí)作修改

李華寫了一則失物招領(lǐng)啟事，內(nèi)容包括了撿到失物的時間、地點、大衣的特征，他的聯(lián)系方式與該啟事的有效期等。

1. 在January 前加on 具體日期前應(yīng)用介詞on。

2. find→found 有具體的過去時間應(yīng)用一般過去時。

3. Exact→Exactly 修飾分詞speaking用副詞。

4. are→is 因there be句式后跟的是a purse，因此be用單數(shù)形式is。

5. cards→card 里面有一張書店的會員卡，前面已出現(xiàn)a，名詞card應(yīng)用單數(shù)。

6. though→so 前后兩句是因果關(guān)系，用連詞so。

7. myself→me 請給我打電話，不是給我自己打電話，充當(dāng)call賓語用me。

8. contacted→contact 在情態(tài)動詞后用動詞原形。

9. 刪去by the emailing 中的the 因通過做某事用by doing sth即可。

10. what→that 因名詞性從句內(nèi)容完整不缺少成分，用that連接。

課堂練習(xí)

Found

At about 12 am on January 9， 2017， I found a blue Nike schoolbag in our canteen when I was having lunch there. To be specific， the bag is made of canvas， inside of which you can find an mp3， an exercise book of English listening and speaking as well as a bunch of keys. I hope to find out the owner as soon as possible， so if you are the very one I am looking for， please call me at 13677853266. I will be available at 13：00 am or after 10：00 pm every day. Last but not least， I would like to remind you that the deadline for my keeping it is before January 29.

Class 4， Senior 2

Li Hua

課外作業(yè)

Found

At 21：00 on January 2， 2017， a staff of our railway station found a handbag at the security check. To be exact， it is a red woman handbag made of fur， whose brand is Coach. Inside the handbag， there is a railway ticket from Beijing to Shenzhen， an ID card and some cash. The owner is expected to call us at 010-67542386 or come to the consultation service in our railway station to claim it directly. Last but not least， we would like to remind you that you have to undertake the responsibility after one and a half months.

Beijing Railway Station

責(zé)任編輯 蔣小青