楊慶春
【話題分析】
興趣與愛好是我們?nèi)粘I畹闹匾M成部分。具有正能量的興趣與愛好不僅能豐富人們的業(yè)余生活,而且也能促進(jìn)社會(huì)和諧發(fā)展。這一話題主要考查學(xué)生如何表達(dá)“對(duì)某件事情感興趣”“喜歡做某事”“ 介紹某一項(xiàng)興趣愛好”以及“介紹并分享自己的業(yè)余生活”等。此話題主要涉及音樂、運(yùn)動(dòng)、繪畫、集郵、收藏、游戲、閱讀、觀光旅行、飼養(yǎng)寵物等。此話題可以寫成記敘文、議論文、應(yīng)用文等文體。
【寫作任務(wù)】
興趣愛好的發(fā)掘和培養(yǎng)對(duì)一個(gè)人未來的人生、事業(yè)都大有好處。你有什么愛好?請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示和要求,以“My favorite hobby”為題,寫一篇英語短文。
1. What’s your favorite hobby?
2. When did you become interested in this hobby?
3. Why do you enjoy your hobby?
要求:
1. 語言流暢,表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,內(nèi)容充實(shí),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
2. 詞數(shù)不少于90詞(開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
My Favorite Hobby
Everyone has his own hobby. It is very important to our future.
【思路導(dǎo)航】
1. 審題:本文是一篇命題作文,要求學(xué)生寫一篇介紹“My favorite hobby” 的英語短文。文章應(yīng)是說明文,介紹“我最喜歡的愛好”,人稱應(yīng)以第一人稱為主。注意,在講述自己愛好的客觀事實(shí)時(shí)需要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),講述什么時(shí)候喜歡自己的愛好時(shí)要用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)。
2. 巧銜接:講述自己有什么愛好時(shí),可用as for me, from then on, not only...but also..., in my opinion 等詞語來銜接上下文。介紹為什么喜歡自己的愛好并說明原因時(shí),可用because等連詞豐富文章句式。
3.句子升格:可以使用I enjoy...because...;In my opinion, they bring me pleasure.; So my favorite hobby is ...等句子,來豐富文章內(nèi)容,表達(dá)自己的看法。
【謀篇布局】
【范文欣賞】
My Favorite Hobby
Everyone has his own hobby. It is very important to our future. It can make us grow as a person, develop our interest and help us learn new skills. As for me, I have many hobbies, but reading books is my favorite one.
When I was a child, I often saw my father reading newspapers after supper. Sometimes I took picture books and sat beside my father to read them. From then on, I got used to reading books.
I enjoy reading books because they help me learn a lot. Reading books can not only make me happy, but also open my eyes.
In my opinion, books are my friends. They bring me pleasure. So my favorite hobby is to read books.
【寫作練習(xí)】
每個(gè)人都有自己的興趣愛好,例如讀書、踢足球、種花等。有的愛好讓我們?cè)鲩L(zhǎng)知識(shí),有的愛好讓我們擁有健康的體魄,有的愛好能夠陶冶情操。請(qǐng)以“My hobby”為題,寫一篇短文,講述你的興趣愛好。提示如下:
1. What is your hobby?
2. How did you get interested in your hobby?
3. How do you benefit from your hobby?
要求:
1.語言流暢,表達(dá)清楚,內(nèi)容豐富;
2.至少寫出兩點(diǎn)從愛好中獲得的益處,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
3.詞數(shù)不少于80詞。
初中生學(xué)習(xí)指導(dǎo)·提升版2021年1期