I Like Sports

Hi， everyone！ Believe it or not， I like sports very much. I have threebasketballs. I play basketball every day. After class， I always play basketball and淤my classmates. I think it’s relaxing and easy for me. I also have four footballs.And于I don’t play football. I only watch it on TV. It’s difficult. I don’t have avolleyball. I think it’s boring. I like playing table tennis best， because tabletennis is our national game. Sports are good to盂us. It is interesting to play sportsevery day.

優點：

這是一篇談論體育用品及體育運動的短文。小作者先是概述自己非常喜歡運動，接著再具體展開介紹擁有的運動物品及相關觀點，最后總結全文，呼應開頭。此外，本文靈活運用了多個句式，增加了不少亮點。總之，本文是一篇成功的學生習作。

需要修改的地方院

①and 改為with。表“和某人打籃球”用介詞with。

②And 改為But。上下文表示轉折關系要用But。

③to 改為for。be good for 是固定短語，意為“對……有好處”。

評分院

按中考英語作文滿分20 的評分標準，本文修改前可得18 分。