My Dream

When it comes to what I want to be in the future，I will say without hesitation that being an engineer is my dream job. When I was a little boy，I always dreamt that I could fly the plane in the sky which is made by our own team. Also，I think it is an honor for me to play a role in the development of China.

To realize my dream，I think I should make an effort to study and develop effective learning methods. Besides， developing good study habits can help me improve. More importantly，I should also keep a positive attitude， which can benefit me a lot.

As the saying goes， “Where there is a will， there is a way.”I believe that l will make my dream come true one day through continuing efforts.

河南省鄭州市第四十七初級中學

指導老師 王麗榮

點評

作者依次講述了自己的夢想是成為工程師、為什么想成為工程師以及現在應該從哪些方面努力來實現自己的夢想。習作詞匯豐富，句式多樣，如運用賓語從句、定語從句、動名詞做主語、to do不定式表目的等。