My Good Friend and I

I have many friends. But I like Sunny best. He is my good friend.

Sunny is ten years old. He has two small eyes. He is thin and tall. He likes reading picture books， watching TV， and he also likes playing computer games. He doesn’t like English.

We often play on Sunday. He teaches me to play yo-yo. And I help him with his English. We help each other. I believe our friendship will last forever!

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這篇文章語言簡潔、通暢。看了作者的描述，我們都對Sunny有了一定的了解。作者重點寫出了Sunny的一大特點：貪玩！不過正是因為Sunny貪玩，不愛學(xué)英語，才有了作者和Sunny之間的互相幫助，使得這份友誼更有意義。

相信大家都有自己的好朋友。他長什么樣，喜歡什么，有什么特點？你能用英語描寫一下嗎？記得要抓住好朋友一兩個突出的特點來寫哦！