The winter comes. Everything is all white. I wear a thick(厚的) coat and go out. Ah! What’s over there? It’s a big bear! It comes to me and says, “Can you tell me a story?”
433000 湖北省仙桃市實驗小學五(5)班 肖雨軒
(琪琪:哇,看完這段話,我想起了《納尼亞傳奇》中的情節。我很想知道肖雨軒同學給這只熊講了一個什么故事!)
Today my little sister comes to visit me. She wears a white coat. We enjoy playing games. She likes to listen to stories. So I tell her a story about bears.
363000 福建省漳州市龍師附小五(2)班 蘇鈺涵
(琪琪:作者真是個好姐姐,不僅跟妹妹玩游戲,還給妹妹講了個關于熊的故事。不過這段話還是欠缺了一點想象力哦。)
I have a toy bear. It’s lovely. It has two big eyes and a gray nose. It wears a red coat. There is a white bag on its back. It sits on my bed every day. Every evening, I tell it a story before I go to bed.
226463 江蘇省如東縣河口鎮河口小學301班 吳艷紅 指導老師 馬巧英
(琪琪:這只玩具熊可真幸福啊,每天晚上作者都在睡覺前給它講故事!如果有人每天給我講個故事就好了。星彩:我給你講。從前……此處略去328個字。完了! )
A polar bear(北極熊) writer
Wears a white coat,
Writing an interesting story
About his white world.
226100 江蘇省海門市通源小學六(2)班 顧章聞 指導老師 吳芳芳
(琪琪:哈哈,北極熊搖身一變,成了一個作家,還給我們書寫他冰雪世界里的有趣故事。作者的想象力不錯哦!)