2018年考研英語一作文試題評析

文/賈從永

一、小作文

Directions:

Write an email to all international experts in your university,inviting them to attend a graduation ceremony.In this letter,you should state the time,place and other information about the ceremony.

You should write about 100 words neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.

Do not use your own name at the end of the email.Use “Li Ming” instead.(10 points)

2018年考研英語一的小作文是一封邀請信，要求考生給在你們大學工作的所有外國專家們寫一封電子郵件，邀請他們參加畢業典禮。電子郵件與書信的格式一樣，也是從稱呼寫起。稱呼要頂格寫，以示尊重。雖然這是一封寫給所有外國專家的信，但它不是一封公開信，所以不能稱呼Dear experts，我們可以稱呼Dear Sir or Madam。

這封電子郵件的正文可以寫成三段。第一段首先說明自己的身份，比如你是你們大學的學生會主席，接著表明寫這封郵件的目的——邀請他或她參加畢業典禮。第二段依次交代這次畢業典禮的具體時間、地點和其他信息。為了使字數達到要求，這一段可以合理地虛構一些畢業典禮的信息。比如，學術委員會的全體成員將會參加這次畢業典禮并向畢業生頒發文憑，在畢業典禮之后將為外國專家安排晚宴等。第三段希望收信人接受自己的邀請，并請收信人盡早回信，告知是否能參加，以便做必要的安排。由于這是一封公務信函，所以要注意表達禮貌得體，我們可以通過措辭和使用虛擬語氣來實現這一點。郵件的最后是署名，寫在正文下方中間偏右的位置，上一行可寫Yours sincerely，下一行寫Li Ming，上下對齊。下面請看范文：

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am the president of the Student Union of Shanghai University.I amwriting to invite you to attend the graduation ceremony on May 12,2017.

The ceremony will take place in the auditorium on campus from 3:00 PM to 5:00 PM.All the members of the Academic Board of our university will be present and award diplomas to the graduates.A dinner party will be arranged for international experts at 5:30.

We would appreciate it if you could accept our invitation.Please inform us whether you can make it as early as possible,so that we can make necessary arrangements.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming(109 words)

二、大作文

Directions:

Write an essay of 160–200 words based on the following picture.In your essay,you should

1)describe the picture briefly.

2)interpret its meaning,and

3)give your comments.

You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.(20 points)

2018年考研英語一的大作文繼續考漫畫作文。在本題的漫畫中，一名大學生正在電腦前選課。他似乎面對兩門課程正猶豫不決：一門課知識新、重創新、有難度；另一門課給分高、易通過、作業少。按理說，面對這樣兩門課程時，這名大學生應該毫不猶豫地選擇前者，可他卻躊躇不定。所以這幅漫畫反映的是一些大學生回避有難度的課程，而選擇容易的課程的傾向。

本文可以寫成三段。引言段描述漫畫，并指出漫畫中所反映的現象。主體段從兩個方面闡述大學生應選擇知識新、重創新、有難度的課程。第一，大學生選修有難度的課程，除了獲得新知識，還可以培養出色的創造力，這將幫助他們在學習上和今后的事業上取得成功。第二，選修有難度的課程幫助大學生獲得自信，因為在有難度的課程中取得成功最能增強大學生的自信。結尾段可以先引用愛因斯坦的話，指出教育的作用，然后建議大學生選擇有難度的課程，因為這些課程會使他們獲得創造力和自信，進而會使他們的學業和將來的事業受益。下面請看范文：

The picture above shows a college student choosing between two optional courses before a computer.He seems undecided as to which one to take: one with little coursework and easy to pass,another challenging but providing new knowledge and emphasizing creativity.The picture reflects a tendency among college students towards choosing easy courses.

But I recommend that college students sign up for challenging courses,as there are many benefits to enrolling in courses that are demanding.First,taking difficult courses can foster creativity in college students and offers them access to new knowledge,which will help them to succeed academically and later professionally.More important,enrolling in tough courses helps college students to gain confidence in themselves,for there are few confidence boosters as powerful as succeeding in a demanding course at college.

Albert Einstein said it best,“Education is what remains after one has forgotten everything learned in school.” Thus,I would like to advise college students to choose challenging courses that can equip them with creativity and confidence,which will in turn benefit them in their studies and future career.(182 words)

語言亮點借鑒：

1.The picture above shows a college student choosing between two optional courses before a computer.上面這幅畫顯示一個大學生正在電腦前選課，要在兩門選修課中選擇一門。show sb doing sth顯示某人正在做某事。

2.The picture reflects a tendency among college students towards choosing easy courses.這幅畫反映了大學生中有一種選修容易課程的傾向。tendency（令人焦慮或不快的）傾向。

3.But I recommend that college students sign up for challenging courses,as there are many benefits to enrolling in courses that are demanding.但是我建議大學生選修有挑戰性的課程，因為選擇有難度的課程有很多好處。sign up for報名參加；為了避免重復，可用take、choose、enroll in替代之。demanding要求高的。

4.First,taking difficult courses can foster creativity in college students and offers them access to new knowledge,which will help them to succeed academically and later professionally.首先，選修有難度的課程可以培養大學生的創造力,并讓他們獲得新知識。這將有助于他們在學習和在以后的事業上取得成功。

5.More important,enrolling in tough courses helps college students to gain confidence in themselves,for there are few confidence boosters as powerful as succeeding in a demanding course at college.更重要的是，選修難的課程幫助大學生獲得自信，因為在有難度的課程中取得成功最能增強大學生的自信。More important，更加重要的是，表示遞進，也可以寫作More importantly。

6.Albert Einstein said it best,“Education is what remains after one has forgotten everything learned in school.”愛因斯坦說得好：“教育就是一個人在忘記了學校里所學的一切之后所剩下的東西。”

7.Thus,I would like to advise college students to choose challenging courses that can equip them with creativity and confidence,which will in turn benefit them in their studies and future career.因而，我想建議大學生選擇使他們獲得創造力和自信的有難度的課程，這將進而使他們的學業和未來的事業受益。equip sb with使某人獲得（某種技能）。□