摘要:“多樣化”是高效英文寫作重要技巧之一。如何改變文章的單調、乏味、呆板,使作品句子長短錯落,重點突出,不同凡響,是每一個英語學習者需要認真研究的課題。
關鍵詞:多樣化;句式;技巧
【中圖分類號】 G648 【文獻標識碼】 B 【文章編號】 1671-1297(2012)08-0113-01
英語的一個很重要顯著的特征就是結構很靈活,句式多變,在英語寫作教學中如何教會學生寫好各種有效,漂亮的句子有多種方法和技巧要學習和訓練。其中,多樣化技巧就是提高英語寫作能力的重要環(huán)節(jié)之一。
一 多樣化的意義
如果文章充斥著簡單句就會顯得單調枯燥,讀者抓不住中心,如果整篇文章都是復合句,讀者會感到晦澀難懂,句式豐富重點突出是一篇好文章所必須具備的基本要求。句式單調乏味是中國學生寫作時最易出現(xiàn)的問題。如果句式缺少變化,文章就會顯得支離破碎,觀點間缺少關聯(lián),讀者就會覺得作者的寫作水平低下,句式的變化不僅增加文章的協(xié)調流暢性,使讀者深信讀者的水平對駕馭主題游刃有余,從而對作品有興趣,作品的感染力和說服力油然而生。
初學者在表達時,只知道“主-謂-賓”,就是“主-系-表”,就像小學生腔調,充滿稚氣。一篇文章盡管所有句子語法都沒有毛病,但讀起來乏味,看上去呆板,如;
Wang ping graduated last summer. She went to work in a countryside school soon after graduation. She received an engineering degree from his college.
這段話句式毫無變化,主語都是She呆板而無味。這三個簡單句完全可以以不同方式連接:After graduation last summer with an engineering degree, Wang ping went to work in a countryside school. 變化后流暢活潑。可見,在英語寫作中,作者除了用幾種簡單的基本句型外,要根據(jù)作品的主題、讀者對象、寫作目的來變化句型才能使作品主次分明,清楚有力。
二 句式變化的策略
1.句子開頭
英語句子最普通的模式是主加謂語,如果作者在一段話中只用這種結構作品必然單調乏味甚至使讀者感到反感。在寫作教學中可教給學生如下的句式開頭:
(1)形容詞開頭
主語開頭: He was shoeless, bearded, half-naked, he looked like a beggar or a lunatic.
形容詞開頭: Shoeless, bearded, half-naked, he looked like a beggar or a lunatic.
(2)副詞開頭
主語開頭:The poor creature was slowly turning away.
副詞開頭: Slowly the poor creature was turning away.
(3)介詞短語開頭
主語開頭:: The King spoke first with a kindly greeting,
介詞短語開頭: With a kindly greeting, the King spoke first.
還有不定式短語、分詞短語等.
To make pancakes, eggs, and bacon for Arthur's breakfast she got up earlier than usual.
Exhausted, the travelers reached hotels exhausted.
2.刪減不必要的詞或短語
幾個有關系的短句可以通過合并,刪減一些詞或結構成為一個句子,
The car was old. It was moving toward a small village.
削減為:The old car was moving toward a small village.
3.使用并列關系
相關的觀點可以將它們并列放在一句話中。用逗號或并列連接詞銜接。如:
(1)I was late for the meeting. I decided to take a taxi. 并為:I was late for the meeting, so I decided to take a taxi.
(2) Ivy had never had a fulltime job before. She was not looking forward to it.并為: Ivy had never had a fulltime job before, but she was not looking forward to it.
4.使用主從關系
如何在一句話中把重要性不等同,但又有關系的觀點表達好需要用主從關系。也就是說重要的觀點放在主句內(nèi),次要的放在從句或短語內(nèi)。這種方法可以避免斷斷續(xù)續(xù)的短句和過多的并列結構。如:
The man was reluctant to report the theft to the police. His money had been stolen.
改為:The man whose money had been stolen was reluctant to report the theft to the police.
The hot spring was at the foot of the mountain. It was discovered by Mr. Greeley.
改為:The hot spring at the foot of the mountain was discovered by Mr. Greeley.
多樣化技巧非常靈活。作者可以隨自己的思維需要把句子縮短、變長、合成或調整。但過分的使用任何一種都是不可取的。須混合使用,長短相間。除了基本句型以外,也可有意識地使用倒裝、強調、松散、圓周、排比句等。還可通過連接短語、省略詞、增加詞、改變詞序等方法來寫出精致流暢的句子。使作品看起來更加令人愉悅。但不能為變化而變化。在很大程度上,使用什么句式還與文章的文體、內(nèi)容等因素有關,內(nèi)容決定形式。只有通過多讀、多揣摩、多實踐,才能掌握多樣化技巧,使讀者領略多樣化給作品帶來的的魅力。