一、套用模板
以下各文段是發(fā)表看法的常用語篇結(jié)構(gòu),其中黑體部分是發(fā)表看法的常用句式,望同學(xué)們將其熟讀背誦,以便在寫作中靈活運(yùn)用。
1. 表贊成
(1)I firmly support the view/idea that students should do appropriate exercise. There are two factors contributing to this point. In the first place, appropriate exercise helps students to build up their strength. In the second place, doing appropriate exercise will ensure that they are energetic enough to study efficiently. Therefore, there’s no doubt that appropriate exercise is beneficial to students. 我堅(jiān)決支持學(xué)生要做適當(dāng)運(yùn)動(dòng)的觀點(diǎn)。主要體現(xiàn)在兩個(gè)方面。首先,適度的鍛煉能幫助學(xué)生增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)。第二,做適當(dāng)?shù)腻憻挄?huì)確保學(xué)生有足夠的精力學(xué)習(xí)。因此,適度的鍛煉會(huì)毫無疑問地對(duì)學(xué)生有益。
(2)As far as I am concerned, I can’t agree more with the ban on the use of plastic bags in restaurants. I hold my view for the consideration of the health of the public. What’s more, plastic bags pollute the environment heavily. So it goes without saying that the government should ban on it. 就我而言,我非常贊成禁止在餐館使用塑料袋的做法。我主要考慮公眾的健康。更重要的是,塑料袋對(duì)環(huán)境會(huì)造成嚴(yán)重的污染。所以說,政府應(yīng)該禁止它。
(3)I fully agree with the statement that parents set a good example to their children in forming good habits mainly because children like to follow or imitate their parents in many ways in their life. Besides, just as the saying goes, “If one sheep leaps over the ditch, all the rest will follow.”我完全贊同這樣的說法:父母應(yīng)該在培養(yǎng)孩子在形成良好習(xí)慣方面給他們樹立榜樣,主要是因?yàn)楹⒆釉谏钪袝?huì)在許多方面模仿父母。除此之外,正如諺語所說:“榜樣的力量是無窮的。”
(4)From my point of view, I am in favour of the suggestion of the government that every citizen do an-hour sport every day to lead a healthy life. For one thing, one hour sport will do good to people’s health, especially to the old and children. For another, to the working people, one hour sport can help them to lessen their stress of work and work more efficiently. 我贊成政府的建議:公民每天運(yùn)動(dòng)一小時(shí),以過上健康的生活。首先,一個(gè)小時(shí)的運(yùn)動(dòng)有益于大家特別是老人和小孩的健康。對(duì)上班族來說,一個(gè)小時(shí)的運(yùn)動(dòng)可以幫助他們減少工作壓力,使工作更有效率。
(5)Personally, I argue in support of the opinion/statement that human beings should live in harmony with nature for the simple reason that only by doing this can human beings benefit themselves. 就我個(gè)人而言,我支持人類要與自然和諧相處的說法,原因很簡(jiǎn)單,因?yàn)橹挥羞@樣人類才可以使自己受益。
2. 表反對(duì)
(1)Personally speaking, I strongly argue against the idea /proposal that senior students undertake extra classes at weekends. It is not only because extra classes will burden the students, but also because good relaxation can improve their attitude and enable them to study efficiently. 就個(gè)人來講,我堅(jiān)決反對(duì)高中學(xué)生周末補(bǔ)課的建議。這不僅因?yàn)檠a(bǔ)課會(huì)增加學(xué)生的負(fù)擔(dān),還因?yàn)橹苣┑姆潘煽梢愿倪M(jìn)學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度并使他們能更有效地學(xué)習(xí)。
(2)To be frank, I can not support the opinion that men are superior to women. My argument for this view goes as follows. For one thing, in modern society men and women are equal in many ways like work, education and so on. For another, women are much better in nursing, teaching and making small parts in factories. 坦率地說,我不能支持男人比女人強(qiáng)的觀點(diǎn),。我的論點(diǎn)如下:首先,在現(xiàn)代社會(huì)中,男女在工作、教育等許多方面都已平等。另外,女性在護(hù)理、教學(xué)和在工廠制作小零件方面都優(yōu)于男人。
(3)I oppose the decision that Peking University shut its doors to students group tours mainly because they don’t consider the interest of visitors. Besides, Peking University belongs to the whole country, so people have the right to visit it. Moreover, the visit of primary students will certainly inspire them to study hard in the future. 我反對(duì)北京大學(xué)不再對(duì)學(xué)生旅行團(tuán)開放的決定,主要是因?yàn)樗麄儾豢紤]游客的利益。除此之外,北京大學(xué)是屬于國(guó)家的,人們有權(quán)參觀。另外,這種參觀會(huì)激勵(lì)學(xué)生努力學(xué)習(xí)。
(4)I object to teacher’s laughing at students’ mistakes, for making mistakes is the first step for them to learn. In addition, this will cause the students to lose heart and even confidence, which will result in their failure. 我反對(duì)老師嘲笑學(xué)生犯錯(cuò)誤,因?yàn)榉稿e(cuò)誤是他們學(xué)習(xí)的第一步。此外,這會(huì)使學(xué)生灰心甚至失去信心,這將會(huì)導(dǎo)致他們失敗。
二、實(shí)例分析
你是否贊成推遲高中早上的上課時(shí)間,并說明理由。(2010佛山二模)
思路分析:先表明自己的觀點(diǎn),是贊成還是反對(duì),運(yùn)用表明觀點(diǎn)的開頭語如:From my point of view,Personally speaking等,然后再簡(jiǎn)要說說理由,如:I hold my view for the simple reason that...或者 I oppose the idea (statement) that...For one thing, ...For another, ...等等。
參考范文:
(1)As far as I am concerned, I can’t agree more with the idea of delaying the opening of the school day of Senior School. I hold my view for the simple reason that we senior students can have a really good rest after a whole day work, which will enable us to be energetic for a new day. What’s more, students can enjoy their breakfast at ease and it will do good to their later study. Finally, delaying the high school schedule will improve our grades and attitudes with great concentration on our studies. There is no doubt that delaying the opening of the school day of Senior School will benefit us a lot.
(2)From my point of view, I oppose the idea of delaying the opening of the school day of Senior School. For one thing, any delay in the start of school will most likely result in a later release time so we certainly will have less time to use the library and other community resources. For another, students are likely to form the bad habit of getting up late and it will be harmful to our health owing to the delay. Moreover, with the delay we will have less time to do after-class activities and to study, which will influence our grades.
三、靈活運(yùn)用
1. 你贊成高中生假期外出旅游嗎?為什么?
2. 國(guó)旗穿上身,你會(huì)支持嗎?簡(jiǎn)單說說理由。
3. 你是否支持高三學(xué)生應(yīng)把學(xué)習(xí)放在第一位?
參考范文:
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(1)Nowadays, more and more senior students are in favor of travelling during vocations. To be frank, I can’t agree more with it. There are several factors contributing to my point. In the first place, journeys can widen our knowledge of geography, customs, cultures and lifestyles of different places and countries as well as enrich our experiences. In the second place, it is the best way to relax ourselves. Furthermore, we are sure to cultivate better relationship with our friends or family. Therefore, it goes without saying that we can benefit a lot from travelling.
(2)Personally, I strongly argue against the idea of senior students’ travelling around during vocations (holidays). It is not only because travelling is time- and- energy consuming, but also because it costs a lot of money. Besides, it may be unsafe for you to travel around owing to the worsening conditions of the community and frequent extreme weather. Finally, it is not so convenient for you to travel around because of the transportation and climate.
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I firmly object to people wearing a flag on their clothing. For one thing, a flag has always been a symbol of a country, so it is really disrespectful to wear a flag on people’s clothing, when it is dirty or torn. For another, others can easily identify your nationality if you wear a T-shirt or a jacket with your flag on it, so it may be unsafe for you especially in some disordered or chaotic countries or areas. Therefore, people should not wear a flag out of respect or for safety concern.
3.
(1)I fully agree with the thought that we senior 3 students should put our study above everything. Reasons are varied. Firstly, if you put study above everything, you will certainly improve your academic performance, which will enable you to go to the university that you long for. Moreover, only by doing this can we make great progress in our studies and it will eventually change our future.
(2)Personally speaking, I strongly argue against the statement that we senior 3 students should put our study above everything. This is mainly because we need many other things like health, fitness and relaxation. If you study all day long without any exercise or relaxation, you will feel stressed and tired, which will lessen the effect of study. Therefore, we should do appropriate sport to build ourselves up or relax ourselves at times, which will ensure enough energy to work hard.
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