許炳杰
一、命題預測
本話題涉及的內容很多,如醫藥的進步、技術的革新、計算機技術、太空旅游和探索、未來世界、機器人、航天知識、最新科研發明、科學與生活、科技與人文、網絡、傳媒等。其中,網絡話題在各模擬考試中出現的頻率較高。網絡在人們的生活、學習、工作中的作用越來越大,網上購物、網上交友、網絡游戲、網絡學習、電子賀卡、網絡媒體已經實實在在地走進了我們的生活,也理所當然的成為了話題作文的“常客”。關于命題,以下幾個具體話題值得關注:
1. 命題人可能要求考生寫學校舉行的科技節的活動新聞,涉及活動的具體內容,參加方式,參加時間已及活動的意義等。
2. 介紹最近某項發明或介紹某一新的產品,分析某些新科技的影響及利弊,并發表自己的看法。
3. 對中國本土科學家獲得諾貝爾獎發表看法,并介紹獲獎者的相關情況。
二、常用短語
1. click on sth用鼠標點擊
2. surf the Internet上網瀏覽信息
3. launch a satellite發射人造衛星
4. carry out a research進行一項研究
5. make a great difference有很大影響
6. have access to/be accessible to能使用
7. enable sb to do sth.使某人能做某事
8. benefit from得益于;從……受益
9. realize ones dream實現某人的夢想
10. learn more conveniently 更方便地學習
11. play an important role in在某方面起重要的作用
12. be famous at home and abroad 在國內外享譽盛名
13. catch/attract/draw sbs attention吸引某人的注意
14. a variety of high-tech products各種各樣高科技產品
15. advanced science and technology 先進的科學技術
16. improve the quality of human life提高人類的生活質量
17. download information from the Internet從網絡下載信息
三、套用句式
1. With the development of information technology,it is easy to find English movies.隨著信息技術的發展,人們很容易找到英文電影。
2. When the iPad was connected to the Internet,students can interact with teachers and classmates about what they learn more conveniently. 當iPad連接了網絡,學生可以與自己的老師和同學更方便的交流學習心得。
3. In a way,the popularity of the Internet and 4G makes a great difference to our life. 從某種程度上,互聯網以及4G網絡的普及對我們的生活產生巨大的影響。
4. What is most amazing is that you can order it to do things like sending messages with your voice. 最令人稱奇的是,你可以利用聲音命令它發出信息。
5. Reading more on science can enrich our knowledge and broaden our horizon. 閱讀更多科學方面的書籍能豐富我們的知識以及擴寬我們的視野。
四、習作修改(做短文改錯,背經典范文)
Dear editor,
Im a senior high school student in Nanchang,named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads and think its a fashion to use it. Use an iPad,we can listen to music,download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen. Apparent,it is helpful to our study,especially to our English listening.
Some students,however,bring their iPads to classrooms and listen music with earphones,that makes the teacher and other students greatly annoying. Whats worse,some of them even waste precious times in class playing video games.
In my opinion,as students,we should made good use of iPads. The classroom is a place for students to study from,and therefore,concentration is badly needed for us to learn our lessons. Furthermore,the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPads at a proper way.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
五、課堂練習
假如你是李華,貴校在學生中征集是否贊成開設iPad課堂(iPad classrooms)的意見。你支持開設iPad課堂;請給校長寫一封電子郵件,要點如下:
1. 資源豐富。
2. 促進交流。
3. 利于環保。
4. 其他理由。
注意:1. 詞數100左右。
2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
3. 開頭語已為你寫好。
Dear Headmaster,
We have been asked about our opinions on opening iPad classrooms.
...
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[寫作指導]
1. 審題。(1)體裁:寫一封建議的電子郵件;(2)題材:iPad classrooms的優勢;(3)時態:以一般現在時為主;(4)人稱:以第一人稱和第二人稱為主。
2. 分段:開頭段:問候 / 寫信背景(表明支持開設iPad classrooms的態度) / 寫信目的。
中間段:具體要點具體展開(注意:不能寫iPad classrooms的缺點,因為你的立場是支持開設iPad classrooms的)。
結尾段:補充說明 / 表達期望(希望自己的建議被采納)。
3. 內容。圍繞1. 資源豐富(materials);2. 促進交流(interact with teachers and classmates);3. 利于環保(For the sake of environmental protection);三個要點展開,可適當添加多一兩個開設iPad classrooms的優勢,但不宜提劣勢。
六、課外作業
假設你是李華,你的筆友Li Lei寫信詢問你關于通過看英文電影來提高英語的看法,請你按照要求給Li Lei回一封電子郵件:要點如下
1. 通過看英文電影來提高英語的現象很普遍。
2. 這種方法的優缺點。
3. 你的看法。
注意:1. 詞數100左右。
2. 可以適當增加細節, 以使行文連貫。
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參考答案與范文
四、習作修改
作者介紹了使用iPad的優缺點,并發表了自己的看法。
1. it→them 指代不一致,此處指代前面提到的iPads,應為復數形式。
2. Use→Using 考查非謂語動詞,因其邏輯主語we與use為主動關系,用現在分詞形式。
3. Apparent→Apparently用副詞修飾后面的句子。
4. 在listen 與music中間加to 因listen為不及物動詞,接賓語時要與to連接。
5. that→which 引導非限制性定語從句不能用that,改為which。
6. annoying→annoyed 因annoyed作賓語the teacher and other students的補足語。
7. times→time 此處指時間,為不可數名詞,沒有復數形式。
8. made→ make 情態動詞后加動詞原形。
9. 刪除study from的from 此處為學習,沒有“從”的含義。
10. at→in 因in a ...way意為:用……方法。
五、課堂練習
Dear Headmaster,
We have been asked about our opinions on opening iPad classrooms. I am in favor of this plan for the following reasons. To begin with,everyone learns differently. Students can customize their iPad with materials that fit their level and learning style,and thus tailor it to different needs. Moreover,When the iPad was connected to the Internet,students can interact with teachers and classmates about what they learn more conveniently. For the sake of environmental protection,opening iPad classrooms is a good way to save trees that we have been cutting down for paper. Most importantly,I believe students will develop their interests in the subjects by enjoying a new way of learning.
I hope you would take my ideas into consideration and we look forward to attending an iPad class.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
六、 課外作業
Dear Li Lei,
With the development of information technology,it is easy to find English movies. Many students use them as a way of learning English. By watching English movies,we can learn more about the world and life as movies present much richer contents than textbooks. In addition,we can hear English in real contest.
However,there are disadvantages. Some watch English movies with the Chinese subtitles,and dont pay attention to the English language or culture,making it complete entertainment rather than English learning.
In my opinion,watching English movies can be a fun and useful way of learning English,but only when it is done with careful planning and strict requirements.
I hope you will make progress in your English learning!
(作者單位:廣東汕尾市陸豐市東海龍潭中學)
責任編輯 蔣小青