高考英語利弊分析型書面表達題導寫

李華軍

一、文體概述

利弊分析類書面表達往往是對某種事物的利弊進行對比，最后往往要求考生表明自己的態度或對事物前景提出預測。通常包括以下內容：說明事物現狀→事物本身的利弊→你對現狀或前景的看法。該類文體一般使用一般現在時，也可根據實際情況使用相應的時態。

二、必備短語

1. positive aspects 積極方面

2. negative aspects 消極方面

3. in conclusion 總而言之

4. be beneficial to... 對……有益

5. do harm to / be harmful to 對……有害

6. through the above analysis 通過以上分析

7. in my opinion/as far as I am concerned 就我而言

8. the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages 利遠遠大于弊

9. have positive/ negative effects on... 對……產生有利/不利的影響

10. play an important/a significant role /part in在……中起重要作用

三、套用句式

1. Generally， its advantages can be seen/listed as follows. 通常它有如下的優點。

2. It is obvious that the disadvantages are much more than advantages. 很顯然，弊遠大于利。

3. Just as a saying goes，“every coin has two sides”， and this is no exception. 正如常言所說“任何東西都有兩面”，這也不例外。

4. Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. 現在很多人偏向于A因為它在我們日常生活中起重要作用。

5. Through the above analysis， I believed that the positive aspects far overweight the negative ones. 通過以上分析，我相信積極方面遠遠大于消極方面。

四、習作修改 下列習作中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

With the development of society， more and more people have money and time for travelling. Travelling is the very good activity. When we are tiring of our work or study， we may travel in our spare time to breathe the fresh air， enjoy the beauty of nature or the charms of other cities and build up our bodies.

But sometime， travelling is something not very much comfortable. The weather changes a lot， and we may get sick easy. The worst of all is that you may have my money stolen or get injured. Of course， travelling was a waste of time and money.

So in my opinion， we should make full preparations for our travel， get the informations about the weather， try to go with a fellow traveler so that you can take care each other， and avoid any accidents.

五、課堂練習

現在越來越多的人使用微信（Wechat）作為交流平臺，微信有它的利弊。請寫一篇短文談談你對微信的看法。 要點如下：

1. 優點：使用時免費，方便快捷；

2. 缺點：個人信息可能會被泄露；當面交流的機會變少；

3. 你的觀點。

注意：1. 詞數100左右。

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

3. 開頭語已為你寫好。

Nowadays， Wechat is becoming increasingly fashionable and popular.

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六、課外作業

現在越來越多的學生帶手機上學，手機作為一種通訊工具，固然有它的優點也有它的缺點，請寫一篇短文談談你對中學生使用手機的看法。 要點如下：

1. 手機的優點：聯系方便。

2. 手機的缺點：分散學習注意力。

3. 你對中學生使用手機的態度。

注意：1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭語已為你寫好。

Nowadays more and more students carry mobile phones to school. In my opinion， therere both advantages and disadvantages for students to carry mobile phones.

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參考答案

習作修改

本文是一篇關于旅游的利與弊的文章。

1. the→a 意思是“旅游是一項很好的活動”，表示“一項”用a。

2. tiring→tired此處人作主語，be tired of為固定搭配，意為“厭煩”。

3. or→and 因“大自然的美”和“城市的魅力”應為并列關系，而非選擇關系。

4. sometime→sometimes 根據句意可知，此處表示“有時”，用sometimes。

5. 把very后的much去掉 因very much修飾動詞；這里是修飾形容詞comfortable。

6. easy→easily 修飾動詞get，應用副詞形式。

7. my→your 因該句主語是you，應將my改為your，前后人稱才一致。

8. was→is 全文用的是一般現在時，故was也應改用一般現在時is。

9. informations→information 因information為不可數名詞，沒有復數形式。

10. 在care后加of 因take care of為固定搭配，意為“照顧”。

課堂練習

Nowadays， Wechat is becoming increasingly popular. Generally speaking， its advantages can be seen as follows. First， we use it for free and can save money. Second， its convenient for us to communicate with our friends everywhere and at any time. Furthermore， Wechat is to the taste of the majority of people. Its attractive interface and various functions are loved wildly.

However， problems exist meanwhile. Firstly， our identity can be revealed when we use Wechat. As a result， we can be in trouble. Moreover， it may make communicating with others face to face less. To make the matter worse， relationship could break down.

In my views， though Wechat has improved our lives， it should be used properly. We shouldnt lose ourselves.

課外作業

Nowadays more and more students carry mobile phones to school. In my opinion， therere both advantages and disadvantages for students to carry mobile phones. Mobile phones can help students keep in touch with their family and friends when necessary. It is convenient for students if there is emergency. However， there are some problems with using mobile phones. Some students focus too much attention on chatting and sending messages， which affects their studies in a way. Whats more， sometimes the ring and shake of mobile phones also distract their attention in class. Besides， for students， using mobile phones costs too much and it will give their parents extra burden. In my opinion， its better for students not to carry mobile phones with them to school in order to learn intently.

責任編輯 蔣小青