Chinese Culture EnrichesMy Life1

掃一掃，聽一聽

It’ s widely believed that China is globally known for its colorful and profound culture. Undoubtedly，Chinese culture has significantly enriched my life.

To begin with，Chinese culture helps me learn traditional culture. For example，we can learn Qu Yuan’s experience and spirit from the Dragon Boat Festival. What’s more， not only does Chinese culture bring me happiness but it also makes me become healthy. When the Spring Festival is coming，Chinese people always return home to have reunion dinner together and share the happiness. Eating dumplings is also a common tradition，which can keep us warm and healthy. Last but not least， Chinese culture like paper cutting makes my leisure activities colorful and relaxing. I fall in love with paper cutting，making me get relief from heavy schoolwork.

All in all，Chinese culture greatly enriches my life. Let’s spread Chinese culture together ！

指導老師辛會勤

點 評

習作內容豐富，條理清晰地將中國文化對“mylife”的影響表述出來，彰顯了學習和體驗中國文化的意義。開篇點題，緊扣主題，結構合理，層次清晰，語言表達流暢，定語從句、動名詞作狀語等為文章增色不少。